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Send Me An Angel by ~Riyuu:iconRiyuu:



He had wings.

Every morning I would rise to see those beautiful wings. The sight of the sun and those long feathers kissing the sky, brought joy to my heavy eyelids.

Several mornings had long since passed, he was no longer seen. My head gave way, my body ached, I'd simply lay back in bed. Where was He?

He was gone.

I slept in, my face covered with disappointment. Apathy licked away the tears. And in my dreams, he visited me again.

He was different.

His wings were black and faded. His body torn and skeletal. My eyes could feel what punishment time had done to Him. I speak, I say: "What happened to your wings?"

His response was not immediate, however he did eventually reply. I waited and I stared. The piercing silence burned my ears, until finally, he mutters: "No hope; nothing left of myself."

A silky black cloak is placed over the sun and He radiates with the moon's glow. He extends his wings and it's no longer a dream. RED blooms as He rips off his wings. "Sometimes it's better to walk", He says.

"You don't need wings to fly", He stares blankly, seemingly puzzled by the remark, "Those wings may have been beautiful, but that isn't why I woke up every morning to see you. The hope in your eyes; the will. It motivated me." His eyes were now glassed over with apathy; His wings shriveled into dust. He stands up, and begins walking towards the exit.

He didn't listen to reason.

Nothing got through at all.


He says: "I never asked for this. I don't want it anymore."

I ask: "Will I see you again?"

"I don't know." He says.
©2007-2009 ~Riyuu
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Written at 5am.
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oh i don't know what this is about
i'm too sleepy to analyse it and besides i dont know you so well anymore

but i wanted to comment to say i liked the imagery
and i still like your writing style
Deep, accurately descriptive and illustrative. Good Work. :D

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Thank you. I honestly haven't written anything in a long time, so, your comment definitely counts.

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Maybe I should try to write more, aye? :}

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Lol I'd say yes, but it's best to write when you're really inspired. Look for inspiration in all aspects of your life, so we can see more poetry. :D

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It's good to see you writing again. All I can say about this piece is that 5am is the perfect time for you to write.

Smile.

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